question 4

Most people liked our video. During a class discussion one of the feedback comments were that they didn't like "the choice of location." I agree with this because the locations don't match. And it doesn't create realism. I would make several changes. I believe Athena should of had more make up and done more with her hair. As part of mise-en-scene. This was picked up by the audiences. The choice of location should have been kept either indoor or outdoor. Some of the framing could of been better. The throbbing lights put people of . Also we could of had better focus in the nature scenes.

However our video does draw ideals between the lyrics theme of nature 'thunder.'

I think when planning and researching its very important to listen to the feedback from fans of a genre so that your aiming to please and you would get a positive reaction. Also audiences like to see that there has been a lot of effort for mise-en-scene otherwise it will be boring and wont be typical of a music video.